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shes_awesome2025-03-30 12:22 pm
elisheva_m) wrote in shes_awesome2025-03-30 12:22 pm
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Opinions requested
Hello,
I'd like to know what others make of the end of one of the scenes in the lakorn-novel I'm writing. The friend who's read it missed part of what I had hoped to convey.
The FL is pretty awesome.
Fandom: None - original fiction. Genre is Thai lakorn (you don't need to be familiar)
Pairings: het (OC)
Rating/Warning: No CW. Teen and up
Length: 614 words
Notes: See post intro. Impressions re the ending are fine. Anything else if you feel like it.
It's this post here.
I'd like to know what others make of the end of one of the scenes in the lakorn-novel I'm writing. The friend who's read it missed part of what I had hoped to convey.
The FL is pretty awesome.
Fandom: None - original fiction. Genre is Thai lakorn (you don't need to be familiar)
Pairings: het (OC)
Rating/Warning: No CW. Teen and up
Length: 614 words
Notes: See post intro. Impressions re the ending are fine. Anything else if you feel like it.
It's this post here.